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Having a dry throat and the urge to drink something I woke up in the middle of the night. With tired eyes I was looking for the alarm clock, reading almost three o'clock in the morning. Shifting the sheets away I stood up and made my way through my room, down the stairs to the kitchen. I tried to turn on the lights but nothing happened. Maybe my parents had forgotten to pay the bill? Weird, they had never forgotten it. But it was too late at night to think about it. Knowing my house well I went to the fridge and stepped into something wet. Curious I looked downwards to see in the light of the shining moon that it was red liquid running out of the fridge. Was it tomato  juice? But we never bought some, do we? I opened the fridge and tumbled away a bit to see that it was a separated head which looked like my mothers. With a shocked expression I looked at her closed eyes, blood streaming from her neck like if she was murdered just before a few seconds. Which means that the killer...
Suddenly I heard a low laugh which seemed to be going louder and louder. I swallowed and full of fear I turned around to see a shadow of someone standing in the door case. The shadow was holding something in his hand and made slowly his way towards me. With heavy breathing I recognized a boy, just a few years older than me, but I had never seen something so creepy. In his pale face, covered by strands of dark, black hair there was a grin carved in his cheeks, his eyes were abnormal large and he doesn't seem to blink at all. Then I identified the thing he was holding as a large knife like these the butchers are using. Unable to move I just stared at him.
Then I heard a chuckle again and with a psychotic voice he says: "I love it, when they show me their fear... Isn't this the best feeling you can give me?" Then he spokes up: "Beside your blood of course! GO TO SLEEP!" And with that he swung his large blade towards me, feeling my life move past me I compressed my (e/c) eyes and waited... But nothing happened. When I carefully opened my eyes again I saw my father standing in front of me, ripped open eyes, blood running from his chest and mouth. With a quiet voice he said: "Run (y/n)... Run and survive...!" Hot burning tears came flowing down my pale cheeks and quickly I ran to the door, out of my house, feeling my heart pumping harder then ever before. I stumbled over my own feet, in panic looking behind me, if I was alone, just to see the street lanterns become blurred and disappearing further and further the longer I was running.

Jeff's POV

I sighed and watched the (h/c) girl ran out. It was a long time since my knife had missed a target but neither I wanted to leave it on me like this nor I wanted to miss the chance to play.
"So... You wanna play a game, won't ya?" My smirk went to a large grin, my wide eyes on the dead man seemed to be her dad. I pulled my blade from the flesh of the corpse, put it back into the pocket of my blood sprinkled white hoodie and turned myself to the door.
"Okay, let's play!"
So after all the fanfictions I read I decided to write my own Jeff the Killer x Reader!
I'm sorry for the shortness but I'm not sure if anybody likes it because it's my first fan fiction ;-; . So if there is interest, I would like to continue the whole thing :)
I would be glad to have any reviews <3

Just for those who are new to fan fictions:
(y/n) : your name
(h/c) : hair color
(h/l) : hair length 
(e/c) : eye color
(s/c) : skin color
(y/town) : your (home) town
POV : Point of view

(Although I read it again after writing there can be mistakes. So if you find some, please let me know, I'm not a native English speaker ^^; )

:iconjeffthekillerplz: (c) Creepypasta writer

Part 1 - YOU ARE HERE!
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:iconfanfictions112:
Fanfictions112 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
YAY i love DEADLY games!
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sanniebannie4 Featured By Owner May 28, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Me: Jeff, no. NO. StOp ThAt. No GaMeS aRe BeInG pLaYeD.
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Gabynic Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
"Was it tomato juice?" Best question asked in the whole history of Jeff the killer fan fics.
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clarkwilson2000 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015
Dont read~ New member
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
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Bunnygoblin Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2014
Who is this guy? I never heard of him befor. Is he from an anime? The pic looked interesting so i desided to read this. seems interestung.
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Aletheiya Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Jeff the Killer is a creepypasta. Try and Google it! :)
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Bunnygoblin Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014
he so cool
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AnimeXxxXAni Featured By Owner Edited Jun 29, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I can't Wait! >//.\\<
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Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014
interesting ^w^
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
YAY!!!~ I like the plot so far!!!(an no, I am not really sad by my parents dying. I am insane like that...)
I am listening to this song:
www.youtube.com/watch?v=o-_opi…
It doesn't fit at all. ZE FIN!!!~(XD)
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darkhairedalpha Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Check out mah Jeff the Killer story... Idk if it's as good as this one, but I worked on them for a while.  *Twitches eye like a mental person*
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:iconzyra01:
Zyra01 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014
Let's play Tom and Jerry/cat and mouse :} ha ha ha HAHAHAHAHA
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UltimateShadzFangirl Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014
If Jeff goes insane on meh..I GO BLOODY MARY ON HIM!! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
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sparrowgirl57 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
*cackles insainely, pulls out pocket knife* Lets play a game!!
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:iconfluffyshadowpaw:
FluffyShadowPaw Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
"WaNna PlAy a GamE?" *eye twitches and I smile insanely*
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hyperharmony Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
YEA LETS PLAY THE KNIFE SONG
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:iconfluffyshadowpaw:
FluffyShadowPaw Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
WOO HOO! *grabs BEN* BEN STAPH PLANKING AND DO THE KNIFE SONG WITH US! *BEN starts and cuts one of his fingers off*
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hyperharmony Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
*blushes*Y DIDNT U GET JEFF!? (She has a crush on BEN & Jeff is her brother)
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:iconfluffyshadowpaw:
FluffyShadowPaw Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*sticks head into Jeff's room* JEF GET YO BUTT OUT HERE AND DO THE KNIFE SONG WITH ME AND YOUR SISTER!
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hyperharmony Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Jeff:but i dont wanna
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:iconfluffyshadowpaw:
FluffyShadowPaw Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*rans into his room, grabbing his arm and tugs him outside* Do the knife song! But be carful! BEN cut off his finger!
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hyperharmony Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Jeff:*cuts off his hand*TOO LATE!!!!

jeff are you ok?
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swreld-star Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I LIKE GAMES :D wait what kind of game? if it a death game my insane side is going to be there locked and loaded ready to fire any gun she got :3 50-cal is her name :3
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blue730 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014
OH NO!!!! Nuu Nuu Nuu Nuu Nuu Nuu 
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Spiritmist16 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
*snarl* JEFF HOW DARE YOU!
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OokamiNekoGirl Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ah Nvm it was but now it isn't.
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OokamiNekoGirl Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
why is this in homestuckxreader?
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DevonJ13 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Student Filmographer
I loved it. Great job for your 1st
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:iconaletheiya:
Aletheiya Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much!
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KillaniChairmode228 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AWESOME XD 
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Aletheiya Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks <3
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KillaniChairmode228 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yourwelcome :iconspazattackplz:
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Exorcest Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013
I like Jeff and all but you uploaded it to a homestuck group sooo... yeahhhh...
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:iconaletheiya:
Aletheiya Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okay this is annoying now =.=
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kasukabe12 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
why is this not in my group yet XD im jk jk but seriously awesome story 
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ALert4Spoilers Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

I DON'TCARE IF IT'S IN A HOMESTUCK GROUP!! I <3 JEFF ANYWAY!!!

(cool story bro)

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Aletheiya Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hahaha thanks I love you <3
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DakotatehLynx Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this shouldnt be in a homestuck group 
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:iconaletheiya:
Aletheiya Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, you're right o.o But someone invited me to do so D:
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CHASlNG-GHOSTS Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why is this is in a Homestuck group? 
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Aletheiya Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Deleted
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akatsukis1plaything Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Student Photographer
I love it, but I am confused about why it is in a homestuck x reader group
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:iconaletheiya:
Aletheiya Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Someone invited me but if this is bothering so many people I delete it again
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Andrea-Hiddleston Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!
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:iconaletheiya:
Aletheiya Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Holy shit :D
I meant I delete it from the group ^^; 
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RedeemerBobtail Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Great introduction to the story^^ I myself wish more people would Read instead of just looking at artwork all the time. You got talent miss. Don't you ever forget it.
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Aletheiya Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much, that means a lot to me <3
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